Rapunzel

Summary


Once upon a time, there was a couple. They wanted to have a baby. Everyday, they prayed to have baby. Finally, they got a baby. The bride wanted to eat a lettuce from the witch's garden. The husband got it secretly. But the next day, the witch knew that there was someone stealing the lettuce from her garden. So she got really angry and suggested him to give the baby to her after she was born. After few months, the baby was borned. Her name was 'Rapunzel', which was the lettuce's name. Soon, the witch came and took the baby. The baby grew up in the tower with no door. One way to go out was to use Rapunzel's hair to climb up or down. One day the prince saw Rapunzel and the witch climbing with her hair. The Prince did it, too. Soon after that, the witch knew about it and the prince jumped out of the tower, and Rapunzel had to cut her hair. The prince got blind. Finally, Rapunzel was alone, she went out of the tower, and found the prince. She teared and after that the tear drop went into the prince's eye. Now the prince could see the whole world and they lived happily ever after..................

Review

Actually this is not a book. This is a fairy tales. But I wrote about this story because I liked the charecteristic of the charecters. Foolish couples lost their kid. And they got their kid really hard. I will talk about the charecters. First, Rapunzel. I think she is really poor. May be she knew that the witch was not her real mother even before the witch or the prince told her. May be she really wanted to find out the secret of the tower everyday! Poor Rapunzel, she finally found the freedom in her life in almost 20s. Next, I will tell you about the witch. The witch, who is really wicked, take Rapunzel from the couple! She might have known that Rapunzel was the only kid they got, and she would know that Rapunzel was the kid with the prayers. The witch could give some other punishment to the couple. I am really curious if eating Rapunzel lettuce was such a bad thing. It would not. In usual life the neighbor can give it to others.
I so sorry to the couple and Rapunzel but FINALLY she found the freedom. Now many children are reading this tales. I think this is not really a good story for those young kids. The story is little bit cruel. In some scene, the prince got blind from falling down from the high tower and get stabbed in the thronbush. It actually kills kids's emotional calm.


This is the end of the book review&summary of Rapunzel.

Grand cleaning day in GLPS

Hi, my name is Shin Eun Bee. I will tell  you my story about Grand cleaning day in GLPS.

Last Saturday, was the grand cleaning day. My roommates worked together really hard. My room was really dirty! It's was like a pigpen. At first, I thought that it is unrealistic. Our room PA said that our room smelled really bad! However because our roommates are doing great in cleaning, our room was really clean!

I think we are great. You can't imagine if you don't see the picture of my dirty room. Today is Wednesday, right? Wow, to tell you something............ Our room gets dirty again after 3 days. And also it gets dirtier than before. Our room  became really dirty because of my clothings. This morning, I freaked out because of my desk and the chair. As I expected, my room was pigpen. ^^

Ants in my room don't have to worry about the famine of their life! I am helping Ant city to continue to live peacefully. I am always living some crumbs of my snack! But I have to vanquish their city sometimes to get green card! Anyway, I said something little bit, no a lot strange.

Finally, I will briefly arrange some words that symbolize my room!

It is Diry like a pigpen, Devoting to get green card, and it's our Duty to clean!


This is the end of my story....................

The End



I am now in Mr.Dean's writing class. I used 'famine', 'vanquish', 'continue', 'city'.
Also I tried to add similes/metaphors and alliteration.

Thank you~!

Apology to Lieju

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   Dear.Lieju

   I'm really sorry that I have done such bad things to you. I didn't understand you that you will feel really bad. I understand your feeling. It is your complex but I wasn't careful.

   I will never do that again to your friends and in front of other guys. And of course, I will tell your friends and other guys that were with me not to make fun of you. Beside you, I will not make other people fun of them because of your height. Also, I will not make you feel bad except for these height situations, too.

   I will give you some of my candies if you want. I will thank you if you except my ammends.

   Again, I am REALLY sorry and I will not do it again.........Sorry......


From, Eun Bee

LISTEN TO ME PLEASE

   Dear my principle............
   Hi, I hate teacher MR.GWAN!!!!!
   He always gives us some crazy project. It doesn't matter with education. However, if I always do it hard, he doesn't make me to make a presentation! Sometimes, I forgot to do my homework, but he always asks me to make a presentation when I didn't do my homework!! And he always say "Hey, why didn't you make a presentation when you do your homework? And why didn't you do the homework today?"
   Do you understand me now? I always get low score because of that!!! Can't you just fire him??? I tried to talk about this with Mr.Gwan, but he doesn't listen to me! I told him that I wanted to make a presentation but he doesn't make me!!! Of course, I get into trouble whenever I talk to him about this.
   Many teachers think that I am not a good student!! They think that I always don't do the work well and complain about the score! Do you know my feeling? It's terrible. My friends always say that I am working the best(Not really best I think...) in the class but I couldn't get the score even higher than some of the loser in my class......................................................
   My mom and I am always really said about this situation. I want you to solve this problem for me because I can't when I say something about this. I have to think that this school is bad when he always treat me like his dog.

Thank you for listening to me. And I hope you can stop him!!!





This is the end of the project about complaints. All the things are not real. I hope that you DON'T misunderstand this to a real situation.

Have a good day~~!