Grand cleaning day in GLPS

Hi, my name is Shin Eun Bee. I will tell  you my story about Grand cleaning day in GLPS.

Last Saturday, was the grand cleaning day. My roommates worked together really hard. My room was really dirty! It's was like a pigpen. At first, I thought that it is unrealistic. Our room PA said that our room smelled really bad! However because our roommates are doing great in cleaning, our room was really clean!

I think we are great. You can't imagine if you don't see the picture of my dirty room. Today is Wednesday, right? Wow, to tell you something............ Our room gets dirty again after 3 days. And also it gets dirtier than before. Our room  became really dirty because of my clothings. This morning, I freaked out because of my desk and the chair. As I expected, my room was pigpen. ^^

Ants in my room don't have to worry about the famine of their life! I am helping Ant city to continue to live peacefully. I am always living some crumbs of my snack! But I have to vanquish their city sometimes to get green card! Anyway, I said something little bit, no a lot strange.

Finally, I will briefly arrange some words that symbolize my room!

It is Diry like a pigpen, Devoting to get green card, and it's our Duty to clean!


This is the end of my story....................

The End



I am now in Mr.Dean's writing class. I used 'famine', 'vanquish', 'continue', 'city'.
Also I tried to add similes/metaphors and alliteration.

Thank you~!